2019年8月写作直播反馈（一）

自现象级英语

每周一段44：预测2030年

长度恰当

have sth lined up: 落地，有谱

planning改为plan： urban planning, career plan

work stress: 不是特指，去掉the

裸辞不能直接用naked resignation, 必须解释quitting one's job before having secured a new one, quitting the current job before having secured a new one (不能确定正式外国刊物用过的话，不能直接想当然使用这类词汇)

highly sought after: 抢手

拓展(mental exercise)：科技感=技术先进 technologically advanced/ forward-looking

头马俱乐部 对原文的仿写注重细节

founder on a declining attendance 出席人数减少

work one's butts off for nothing, hard slog, toil, workaholic, grind, grinder 拼命工作的人， a cushy job 轻松的工作, a lucrative job 报酬丰厚的工作， drudgery 苦差事

a dead-end job 一眼望到尽头的工作

make sb do sth: make是a weak verb , 尽量少用

move up the academic/ consulting/ corporate ladder 向上爬

plus 表达新的观点

map out a plan: 清晰的目标，计划

holiday动词的用法，亮点

enter choppy waters 波动

snap up: 抢购，比buy，purchase更精准

steer clear of Youdao whenever you can 尽量避开有道词典： 例如shake the elbows，错误用法

dethrone: overthrow, go out of fashion/ style/ favour 不再时髦

converge with international norms

try one's luck替换gamble

每周一段45：中国的硬件优势

human health改为nutrition

poverty reduction 脱贫, poverty alleviation

skills shortage, emissions reduction

一般的 Rui-like

奥威尔式的，奥威尔版的 Orwellian=Orwell-like; 克林顿式的 Clintonian= Clinton-like

单相思 unrequited love

quixotic 唐吉坷德式的

名词：看着容易实际难 deceptively easy

prompt 及时的，没有拖延的： a prompt reply, quick, undelayed

inclusion:包容 改为abundance

便利、藏量丰富 可规模化 scalability
递进的两点之间有重复性

内在逻辑innate logic,implicit logic

Personal Review

That [frustrations of writing] itself might have been an insuperable problem. After all, excellent writers are also coping with it. But discouraged learners are already suffering from writing without thinking. As errors accumulate and thoughts stick, students find it increasingly difficult to express their ideas in writing. More importantly, peer pressure looms large as some disciples are more susceptible to unsatisfactory performance than others. This is why deliberate practice and mental exercise are central to writing practice. Without them, it is far-fetched to suggest that practice makes perfect.        

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