9 – 1：WRITING ABOUT YOUR CAREER

题目

Write a paragraph about your career path. What is your  work experience and education? What are your plans for the future? Has the  economy affected your career? Remember to use adverbs of sequence to order  your career events.

老师留言

A detailed description of your education and work  experience in China and US. Review the difference in usage of 'me/myself' I  didn't understand what you meant when you said: "..political science  holds far more the commonly recognized values in our world"?

My major was political science in college in Beijing.  Before my graduation, I had taken part in the student movement and become a  leader in it. After that, for some political reason in China, my college  degree got compromised, leaving me as a life-long self-made student. Without  a diploma, I had to look for a job irrelevant to my higher education  background in Shenzhen, a coastal city in southern part of China, where most  Chinese then thought as the front for China's opening and reform. Few years  later, the first stock maker bubble burst and the economy fell dramatically.  Prior to my managing to immigrate to US, many local residents and I had  become broke. Finally, I settled down in New York.Subsequently, I enrolled myself into a local  college and continue to study political science that holds far more than the  commonly recognized values in my motherland. Meanwhile I was falling back  onto my favorite social activities--promoting civil rights in China, and  became a veteran. At the same time, keeping myself financially capable for my  family was always on the top of my agenda. In those years, I witnessed  American prosperity, economy turning back and market picking up. I set up my  own company and learned to trade stocks on my own. Nevertheless, during the  carnival, who could feel the financial crisis was creeping near? Fighting  against the crisis in some way, shape or form, I turned myself penniless  again.

写作挑战调查：70分数