2019年5月写作直播反馈（二）

自现象级英语

To leadfrog straight to a situation where mistakes are few.

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To improve: origin--origins 

Example 2
The Yangtze River's origins
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To improve: lie in, independent school

Strive to be flawless.

Italic

literally 字面上

Example 4

To improve: once in a dinner---over dinner

over dinner
Example 5
Corrections

the way sth/sb does sth, transform how sb does sth

Example 6

E-learning (electronic)一类事物， rival: traditional learning, classroom-based learning 线下课

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political entity 政治实体, 注意语域register

Corrections

power balance/ inbalance

Example 9
Corrections

国际视野 international practice

Example 10

transform: 显著的改变，game changing, game changer 此处word choice/diction 选词不当

affect: more general
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冠词 Example 13
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judge sb doing sth 用法错误

Corrections Example 15

Personal Review

"The cowards never started, and the weak died along the way--that leaves us. "

When I look back on our live lecture last evening, I find Phil Knight's words inspirational. The origins of the passion for learning lie in the pursuit of excellence and of exceeding the limits. The passion has enabled us to leapfrog straight to a situation where learning is an innate desire and natural impulse, byassing a mire where learners are grappling with the daily grind of acquiring knowledge.

The sad truth is most of us have been brought up to aim for high marks only and we stick to them all our lives. High academic performance, however, is no more significant than attitude. 

"Attitude, not aptitude, determines altitude."