Jenkins 修改简历-求助信

Dear Ms. Jenkins,

I hope this letter finds you well.

This is Li Hua, one of your students. Concerning my application for the position at a cooperation with foreign capital, I'm writing with regards to the assistance with the enhancement of my motivation letter as well as my resume enclosed.

For the sake of being natural and formal, I'd like to have the wording and format revised. For example, I want to be sure whether I should write with first person or third person and, additionally, whether a profile photo is needed.

Your kindness to furnish me with your selfless support is highly appreciated. Please keep me informed at your earliest convenience.