应用文/建议信
2023-03-19 本文已影响0人
YangLittle
【2014安徽改编】
假如你是李华,你的朋友James来信诉说了自己的困扰:随着高考的临近,学习和心理压力日益加大,正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文写一封回信。内容包括:
1.表示理解并给予安慰;
2.提出建议并说明理由。注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 题目和首句已为你写好。
审题
文体:建议信
时态:一般现在时
谋篇布局
para1:背景+目的 总结+祝愿
para2:要点1、2
para3:总结+祝愿
Possible version :
Dear James,
Terribly sorry to know that you are so stressed that it has affected your study and life, I’m writing to express my concerns and offer you some suggestions.
Everyone will have some stressful moment when everything seems to be going wrong ,so your situation is quite understandable.However, the situation can be changed if you take the following suggestions. To begin with, keep a balance between study and rest and take proper exercise. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. Taking more exercise to relax yourself can help you relieve your pressure, enabling you to live a healthy life. Additionally, it’s highly recommended to have brief conversations with close friends or trustworthy teachers, from whom you are sure to get encouragement and regain confidence. Most importantly, you’ll be more organized and less likely to be affected by pressure if you make a proper learning schedule.
Hopefully, these suggestions will be of some benefit to you. Looking forward to your returning to your best soon.
Yours, Li Hua
实践
书面表达
为了帮助中学生健康成长,某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑李华,收到一封署名为Jamie的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰:近日容易发脾气,使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容要点如下:
1) 表示理解并给予安慰;
2) 提出建议并说明理由。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
学生实例1