IELTS Writing task 1

Topic: Should we share more informations in our world (scientific, business or academic) for free? Discuss and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, many people think that it is good to share au much as informations as possible in our world. However, there are some people stand opposite of it. In my opinion, we can neither share all of our personal informations, nor keep all of them in secret in the reel world, unless there is only you alive.

People who support this statement give there own answer: in our world, we can hardly do something successfully at many time, especially in our academic studies ou business plans when we are alone and close. For exemple, in our school, we always need the formulas, the precedent research or their conclusions, because it is not possible to start at zero every time. These are important, valuable information for their creators, if they have not shared it, you are always blocked. So it is a catastrophe for you and for the development of this world.  

But, on another hand, those people who don't agree to share as much as informations have their reasons of course. One of the most concerned is about information crime. When people put more and more informations online, the thieves, who have an bad idea in their brain, focus on those more personal: name, address, telephone number, etc. These are essential and they think it is worth to steal them. By the way, they can pretend you and do other bad thing like drugs, even you never know it before. The fear tells them to keep secrets, whenever and wherever.

For me, I think maybe my informations have been stolen yet but I still allow to share them if need. Be careful is not wrong. I hope people can do good things with the informations they have, al least, most of them. The trust gives us a better world, isn't it? It's sure that we must take our precaution against the crime.