2020-12-13 2017年作文

47题中国文化的介绍

整体结构完成，内容夯实，而且连接的词语用的也很流畅。补充好词佳句如下：

feel obliged and honored

you will feel assured that xxx

a better insight into what makes Chinese culture so charming

divide the presentation into three main aspects

concentrate on the distinguishing features  of Chinese culture

put much stress on

连接词：

first and foremost ;in addition; last but not least

和人商议：

what do you think f the arrangements

do you have any suggestions on the contents of the presentation.

48中国的博物馆和游客数量

第一句：

As we can see ,the chart shows the changes in the numbers of XX and XX.

从句

the year has seen an increase in the number of X,which has risen steadily from x to x.

A number of factors are accountable for the notable changes.

on the one hand,on the other hand.

改名开放：

with the pace of reform and opening up keeping ahead

the significance of inheritance of traditional culture

along with the horizontal exaltation

it has become a common sight这已经成为一种普遍现象。

As carriers and disseminators of Chinese spiritual culture

appeal to massive crowds吸引大批群众

draw the conclusion,得出结论

become an inexorable trend for people to elevate their spirits

What remains to be done is to improve the construction of spiritual culture to meet our citizens' needs for the cultural demands.