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15班第五次优秀作文展

2021-01-03  本文已影响0人  善待自己

林雍臻

Dear Eric,

  How are you? We are going to graduate from this school soon. You are my best friend and I'm sad that we have to go our separate ways now. I have something to tell you now.

  We met each other for the first time on the first day in Great 6. I felt curious and lucky when I met you. You are always positive and helpful. I remember I got a bad grade once, I felt so upset that I didn't talk with anyone that day. But you noticed me and said, "Failure is the mother of success, I believe you must succeed if you hold on." I was so touched by you, so I tried again and I succeeded in the end. I want to thank you because you gave me a hand when I was in trouble, we did lots of things together, thank you for all you have done for me.

  Best wishes to you !

  Yours,

  Jack

杨景智

Dear Mike,

How time flies! We have been classmates and friends for 4 years. But now, we need to go our separate ways, and I really want to say thanks to you.

I remember meeting you for the first time in Grade Six. I thought you were a shy boy, but after having a conversation, I realized you were really a friendly and helpful person, and I felt lucky to make friends with you. I want to say thanks,because you have done a lot to help me in the past four years. As the best friends, we always spent time together and helped each other to solve problems.Thanks to your help, I can have a happier and more meaningful junior high school life which I will remember forever.

Although there will be many difficulties ahead of us, I believe both of us will do a good job. Good luck and hope to see you again sometime soon!

Yours,

Jack

田雪菲

Dear Mrs.Tian,

How are you?It’s a pity that I am going to graduate from this school soon. Although I met you in the fourth grade of junior high school, I believe that I will miss you in the future.

When I met you for the first time, I thought you were very strict. But strangely, when I was in your class, I started raising my hand to answer the questions. I used to be very shy and seldom raised my hand, but because of you, I would like to be brave. You always had a good way of teaching English and we were all interested in your class. You are really serious and patient, and we have learned from you a lot. You not only taught us many important knowledge points, but also told us how to be a good person. Without you, I would not have made so much progress in English .Thank you for all you have done for us.

Best wishes to you!

Yours,

Jack

王浩然

Dear Mr. Green.

  How are you these days? We are going to graduate from our school soon. And it's a pity that I will leave the school forever.

   I remembered meeting you when I first started my life in Junior high school, I was poor in my subjects and didn't get good grades. I always felt nervous and was worried about my scores. However,you kept encouraging me to work hard and pay more attention in class.

  You always took the time to help me work out the answers. Because of you, I got better grades. And became much more confident in class .You are really a good teacher. And I will never forget what you've done for me. Best wishes!

Yours,

Jack

张轩睿

Dear Ms Lin,

  How’re you ? I’m sad that it’s time to graduate from this school soon.And it’s also the best time to say thank you.

  When I met you for the first time in Grade 8,I didn’t think you were a teacher with lots of teaching experience as you were so young. But you changed my thoughts two months later. It was Friday, I felt down that I got a lower grade in Chinese. You noticed this and asked me to come to your office .In the office, to my surprise, you helped me correct the mistakes I made and explain the difficult things to me with patience. What’s more, you gave me clear instructions so that I could study more easily and wisely. After that, my grades improved.

  Thank you for your kindness and the strong sense of responsibility.

 Best wishes!

Yours, Jack

孙晨祎

Dear Mary,

How are you?It’s a pity that we’re going to graduate from this school soon.

I remember meeting you in Grade 6. I thought you were very friendly when I first met you,I remember on the first school day, I was too shy to talk to anyone. Then you came over and communicated with me to make me relax. Because of you, I felt less nervous. You are my first friend in this school. You stayed with me when I felt sad and you helped me to deal with many problems. You are really helpful and caring. I can’t believe it’s been four years and we have to go our separate ways now. I’ll never forget the things you’ve done for me.

Best wishes to you!

Yours,

Jack.

                                                                     Yours Jack

张菁竹

Dear Miss Giraffe,

 Are you all right?  It is a pity that we are going to end our four-year junior high school life.

   When I met you for the first time,I thought you were very friendly and lively. I remember the first day when I started at school, I was a little nervous because I did not know anyone.Luckily , you sat in front of me and told me your name. So we became friends. I felt relaxed after I met you. When I was sad, you tried your best to make me happy. You always told me,“You can do it better!”Because of you, I have done a lot better than I thought. In these four years, we discussed fun things together, made new friends and learned together. Thank you for all you have done for me.

   I can’t believe it is been four years and it is time to say goodbye. Soon, we will go our separate ways and finally go to the difference. The future may not bright, but full of unknown. I hope you have a good luck.

Yours, Jack

王思涵

Dear Mr Zhang

  How are you? It’s a pity that I’m going to graduate from this school soon.

  When I met you for the first time, I thought you were very strict, But soon I found I was wrong, I remembered it happened after a physics test, I got a bad grade. My mother got angry and shouted at me even for two hours. The next day, one classmate told me that you let me go to your office with my paper. When I heard this, I felt nervous because I thought you would shout at me like my mother. But when I entered your office ,I found I was wrong. You didn’t shout at me, instead you helped me solve my problems. With you help,I got a good grade in the next test. Thank you for helping me a lot in my middle school life. I will never forget you!

Best wishes and good luck for you.

Yours, Jack

17班李天格

Dear Mrs.Dong,

   I’m Jack, I’ll graduate from our school soon, and the person I want to thank is you. I really want to thank you.

  I still remember the first day I met you. You introduced yourself to the whole class and began our first class with a beautiful smile. At that time, I thought you were the prettiest teacher I’ve ever seen. I was so surprised and pleased that I forgot to open my textbook.

  Looking back at the past four years, you’ve taught us to do many things. You encouraged me to take part in the English speech competition when I didn’t dare to try. Because of you, I have overcome many difficulties and became more confident. I won’t forget about your kindness and your words. You are my teacher forever.

  Now I have to leave the school. I have to leave the place that I studied and laughed. I’ll remember you and our school.

    Yours, Jack

马芊慧

Dear Eric,

  Long time no see. We’ll graduate from junior high school soon. This email is a special gift for you.

  I first met you in Grade 6. At that time, we were so shy that we didn’t have communication anymore. I still remember that PE class, when I fell down during running, you bandaged me and took a rest with me. From then on, we became best friends. In learning, we helped each other and made progress. In daily life, we often went out to play and had a good time. I still have the little bear puppet you gave me for Christmas. More than five months to go, we have to go separate ways. I know it’s hard for us to get into the same school again. We can’t go to school together. But the friendship will continue, and it will inspire me to be a better myself.

   I hope you can have a time in senior high school.

  Yours, Jack

王宜诺

Dear Zhang,

  Four years of junior high school life is about to pass. During this time, I got a lot of friendship and touching things.And you’re one of the people I want to thank the most.

  Do you remember the first time we met? In Grade 6, you were cheerful at that time. You would clear all my unhappiness.Also, your smile was like the warm sun in winter. It warmed my heart and gave me power to move forward.

  I still remember once when I was doing my homework, I almost cried because I couldn’t solve the problem. You comforted me in a low voice, looked the book carefully and patiently. Your voice was so soft that I couldn’t forget it.

  I am really thankful to you because you helped me a lot. “A short parting is for a permanent party.” I believe we’ll meet again.

  Good luck with everything.

Yours, Jack

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