Essay52 Feb 21,2017 Recap(2)

Prepared Speech

Speech title: Dream

Project: CC2

Parts of the speech:

Why? Why do we have to change our dream and not let it be fulfilled? Why do we have to surrender to the so called reality? What is the reality actually?

The reality is not real, it is a barrier keeping us from all the possible fantasies. Flying, for example, had been a dream to mankind for thousands of years. A hundred years ago," man was not able to fly" was still regarded as the" realiry". Now, if that was really the reality, what did the Wright Brothers do? How did some of you get to America? Only when we believe that the realityis not real, can we soar with our dreams.

Individual Evaluator: Ivy

Wonderful comments:

Have strong points. Use little own dream to attract listeners' attention, then useseveral questions to start this speech and appeal audience to follow. Do have many eyes contacts, good point use " appreciate "at beginning.

Point that should beimproved:Move around or use gestures to organize the outline clearly. Speech without draft.