11.5雅思写作

Types of question

• point of view
• argument
• problem

Point of view

some people believe…to what extent do you agree or disagree?
同意或者不同意某人说的话 双方都要考虑
a.背景
b.观点 以some people为标志
c.提问

审题

1. 区分题目中给出的背景与观点 （根据西方社会主流观点）

• some people后的才是观点
• 注意逻辑关系 because后面

2. 抓出对于话题的正反两方
3. 根据双方说法需要回答什么
4. 自己的看法

• 高中生是否应该参加免费社区服务？
  不一定要完全同意／反对 可倾向于同意／反对
• the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of society in which they are sold?
  A：明星代言、宣传
  D：商品的高销量反映真实需求、个人预算和用户评价
• getting old is entirely bad 【in the modern world】?
  A：科技发展难以跟上、空巢老人
  D：（benefits）医疗进步、娱乐方式业余生活丰富、社会福利
• public museums will not be needed because people can see historical objects and works by using computers?
  D：公众博物馆很重要
  储存功能、公众教育、休闲场所

文章结构

• 单边论证
  开头：改写题目话题和观点+（理由）+看法A
  立论：正面论证A1
  立论：A2
  立论：A3
  结尾：重申看法A+理由
  *第一段、最后30-40，中间主体70
• 让步论证
  立论1 ➡️驳论段：提出我方不足A+解决／对方合理之处+反驳

提纲

示例

练习：getting old
不用因果、随着，直接陈述事实

Introduction

1. nowadays, a large amount of advertising is aimed at children. Some people...negative effects and should be banned?

• 包含背景（全部是事实）的题目：改写背景+改写题目+表态 （3 sentences）
• 改写句型：
  主语从句：it is true that.../not uncommonly.../it is interesting to note that...(不要原句的整体重复)
  ➡️It is true that children become target population.../many advertisers produce large quantities of advertisement in a way that attracts children...
• 转述观点：
  some suggest that...
  it is argued that...
  it has been claimed that...
  ➡️...should not be allowed because of the possible negative effects
• 表态
  I agree with the opinion.
  I argue against the idea.
  In my opinion,...
  My view is that...
  I contend that...

👆

➡️some claim that...

Practice

produce a marked effect

• as 引导的原因状语从句（第一段写的理由后面要写到）
• 可添加相关背景（必须是前提）
• due to +名词短语（消极）
  thanks to +n.（好）
  because of 强调因果逻辑（中性）
• 👉Some people say that technology has made children less creative than they were in the past?