11 –高级-单元1：WRITING ABOUT SUCCESS

题目

Write about the traits and habits of a successful person  you admire. He or she does not have to be well-known. If you prefer, you can  discuss the topic in more general terms.

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Agreement - You should use the word 'assures' as in simple  present tense, if the subject is the third person singular, the verb form  should be 'verb+ 's' or 'es', e.g.,"..the thing which assures..."  whereas you have used 'assure', e.g.,"...the thing which assure..."  Missing Word - conjunction: I have added conjunction "and" in the  sentence because the conjunction "and" is used to join two words,  phrases etc referring to things that are related in some way.  e.g.,"...passion, ambition, persistence, competitiveness, pro-activity,  and resilience. "

Normally, when we talk about a successful person we  admire, we are talking about one's career success. We are admiring one’s good  deeds, the influential things being done and ambitious dream being realized.  There are millions of successful people in history, and millions in our real  world. So, the very intriguing question for us is: What’s the most common and  most decisive quality which leads a person to be successful? We may count on  those traits: passion, ambition, persistence, competitiveness, pro-activity, and  resilience. You name it. All these traits not necessarily bring anyone into  the street of success because those traits are intangible and subjective.  Everyone, be himself/herself successful or not, may claim that he/she has  some of those good characteristics. Where is the thing which assures us  success? Here, I stress on the habits, which may somehow be objective, could  be measured by time. The first among those habits I would say is enjoying  loneliness, which could be measured by your time. How long would you stay  just by yourself? In loneliness, you cultivate your mental maturity,  strengthen your good personality. In loneliness, you distill essence from  your experience and stew wisdom from learned knowledge. Wisdom brings vision  for successes%%.  Second, enjoying and love studying, which could also be measured by time. How  many hours a day you focus on studying? Studying and learning opens your eyes  and mind, restrains you from impertinence in words and acts, and, eventually,  prepares you for success. Third, focusing on future. A successful person  habitually looks and thinks tomorrow, predicts what will happen, expecting  things are coming. Be prepared, ready and then become proactive. Habits  refines your personality; and the good personality lead you to success.

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