[作文]

Students should only take courses in college for their jobs.

College has long been seen as the gateway to a successful career, and by extension, a successful life. While noble and lofty, this view has little bearing on reality - today colleges have become black-holes that suck students into a never-ending cycle of classes that bear little, if any relevance upon their future careers. Unsurprisingly, a culture of apathy, and not one of inspired learning, has resulted.
Therefore, A college curriculum should be designed around the career a student will pursue upon graduation.

Today's college curriculum requires that an English major complete courses in Physics, Biology and Chemistry (and even several units worth of a foreign language). If a British literature student's focus is, say, Chaucer and late Medieval English writing, his/ her knowledge of wormholes or the nuances of French etiquette is going to have very little bearing on his/her career. Sadly, this student will often be forced to spend an extra year, if not longer, struggling to complete these courses.

Meanwhile, that student's goal of writing a dissertation on Chaucer and becoming an expert in the field becomes ever more distant. In the end, it is not unheard for a student to graduate and take some job unrelated to literature, just to cover the costs of an extra year of tuition. Of course, we could substitute in almost any other major and the story is the same: an aspiring concert pianist who must deal with the rigors of statistics, the scientist who must forgo working in a research lab because of some pesky(讨厌的) requirement on British literature. Ultimately, forcing students to take classes outside of their intended careers can not only be costly and time-consuming but can also cause them to lose focus and inspiration.

Colleges today have become a ritual today have become a ritual in which students , forced to "do their time," are required to take courses outside of their area of expertise. This cost of this system is not only wasted years for students in lecture halls but also less time working in their respective fields. By depriving society of a motivated work force, even if for one year, colleges may be doing society more harm than good.

写作要点：
1先写好thesis， 主题句
2 写好body，body分两端段，第一段是论点1，第二段是
3.有时间可以写cossession（让步段）， 也可以不写
4.写好conclusion，总结
5.最后加上Introduction在第一段，主题句之前加上，Therefore