习作一篇

      今日晚间空闲，正在刷短视频，突然蹦出来一条求助消息，应该是去年带过如今已经到了大一的学生发出的。结合她原有的思路和基本表达，帮她修改了一下。

          Shopping online

      Nowadays，more and  more people prefer to choose online shopping instead of traditional style. I think the reasons are as follows:   

      First， some people are too busy to go to the supermarkets or  the shopping malls after work on weekdays.

    Second，online shopping can make people experience the joy that they get from this convenient way，attaining the objects they want to buy but without leaving their houses. Furthermore，with the development of economy and technology，consumers now have far more choices  on the  Internet than in physical stores so that it may meet varieties of requirements of different customers.

      Last but not the least， there are many activities to attract and encourage people to consume every year such as the Double Eleven Festival, they are usually given so great discount that almost no one can resist the temptation.

    As for me，I am a devoted online shopping maniac.I purchase most of things on the Internet so that I can  spend more time on my hobbies. Only in this  way can we feel better during the present hard time. Do you think so?