2019年英语高考真题（北京卷）写作解析
第一节 应用文写作（15分）
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim打算署假期间来北京、天津和上海旅游，发来邮件询问相关信息。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括:
1. 交通出行;
2. 必备衣物。
注意:
1. 词数不少于50;
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
_________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作指导】
本题考查的是建议信应用文写作。考生需要结合生活实际，综合考虑气候、环境等多种因素，就交通出行和必备衣物两方面，用英语给英国好友提出建议并给出理由。建议信文章结构参考如下：
篇首句：说明写信目的；
篇中句：介绍详情、提出具体建议；
篇尾句：提出希望采纳建议，并祝福。
【好词好句】
篇首句：说明写信目的
1. I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful.
很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。
2. I have received your letter saying you plan to play a visit to China for ten days next month. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you.
我已经收到了你的来信。信上说你打算下个月来参观中国十天。可能下面的建议对你是有帮助的。
3. I'm writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of our hotel so as to attract more clients(顾客).
我给你写信是想说明一下我对于进一步改善我们旅馆的一些想法，以吸引更多顾客。
4. You have asked me for my advice with regard to how to learn Chinese, and I will try to make some suggestions here.
你关于如何学习汉语询问我的建议，那么我就在这里给出一些建议。
篇中句：介绍详情、提出具体建议
1. I'd like to suggest that... 我想要建议......
2. In my opinion,... 在我看来，......
3. If I were you, I would... 如果我是你，我会......
4. You'd better do.../not do... 你最好/最好不......
5. It's necessary for you to read some books about these places before you come to see them with your own eyes. With more knowledge about these places, you will have a better understanding of Chinese history and culture.
在你来亲眼看到这些地方之前，你有必要读一些关于这些地方的书。有了关于这些地方更多的知识，你将会更好的理解中国的历史和文化。
6. First of all, you should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes in class so that you can go over your lessons as soon as you can after class.
首先，你应该认真听老师讲课。上课做好笔记，以便下课后可以及时复习。
7. As is known to all，vocabulary is of great importance. You should spend half an hour in the morning reciting words and reading texts aloud.
众所周知，词汇是非常重要的。你应该早上花半个小时的时间背单词和朗读课文。
8. What’s more, try to communicate with your classmates in English out of class. Only in this way can you improve your listening and spoken English quickly.
还有，试着在课外用英语和同学交流。只有这样，你才能够很快的提高英语听力和口语。
9. Last but not least, you should develop the habit of keeping a diary, which helps improve your written English and helps you go over/review the words and expressions that you have learnt.
最后但也是很重要的一点是，你应该养成记日记的习惯，这会帮助你提高英语写作，也会帮助你复习学过的单词和短语。
篇尾句：提出希望采纳建议，并祝福
1. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you.
2. Best wishes!
(给你)最美好的祝愿!
3. I hope that my suggestions are helpful for you anyway. I would be more than happy to see improvement.
无论如何，我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。我会非常高兴看到情况改善。
4. I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account. Whatever you decide to do, good luck with your studies/work!
我相信你会认真考虑我的建议。无论你决定做什么，祝你学习/工作好运。
5. I sincerely hope my advice will be some help for you. If there is more I can do to help, please let me know.
我真诚的希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。如果有更多我可以帮忙的，请告诉我。
【优秀范文】
Dear Jim,
How is everything going? I'm very pleased and excited to learn your travel plan to
Beijing, Tianjin and Shanghai. Welcome! It's my great honor to offer you some travel tips, which, I hope, can solve your problems.
Transportation matters so much while traveling. Beijing, Tianjin and Shanghai all
have the excellent subway systems which can take you everywhere in the city. If you want a deep experience in the city, shared bikes would be the best choice. As for city-to-city tour, the high-speed rail is highly recommended because it has been the most convenient way in recent years. As for clothes preparation, sun-protective coats and hats would be necessary, considering you will come to China during the summer. Also,
pack a pair of comfortable shoes in case of the city walk.
I hope these suggestions above will be of some help to you. Perhaps we can meet
in Beijing? Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
第二节 看图写作（20分）
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们班上周组织了一次以“劳动最光荣”为主题
的社会实践活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述整个过程。
注意：词数不少于60。
提示词：西瓜watermelon
【写作指导】
内容要点:
1.老师在黑板上写下活动主题“劳动最光荣" ;
2.打包行李出发去乡下;
3.在乡下摘西瓜;
4.和家长吃饭,回忆一天的劳动历程
考生需要运用英语有逻辑地介绍自己参加社会实践的全过程以及参与活动的感受。从分析、构思到表达，就是学生解决问题的过程。
【好词好句】
inform sb. of sth. 告诉某人某事
regard … as 把……认作
resist 抵抗
be involved in 参与
luggage 行李
destination 目的地
got down to 开始认真做
speak highly of 高度评价
1. We regarded it as a wonderful opportunity to experience the real life and couldn't resist the desire to be involved in it.
我们认为这是一个体验真实生活的好机会，忍不住想要参与其中。
2. Some students were responsible for picking the watermelons; some students put the watermelons into the baskets while others carried the baskets filled with watermelons to the specified place.
一些学生负责摘西瓜;一些学生把西瓜放进篮子里，另一些学生把装满西瓜的篮子搬到指定的地方。
3. With my favorite meal served, they spoke highly of me.
他们端上了我最喜欢的饭菜，对我评价很高。
【优秀范文】
Last week, our school organized an activity named “Glory of Labor", which proved to be meaningful and indelible.
When we held the class meeting, our teacher informed us of the news that an activity named “Glory of Labor" would be held. On hearing that, we were, extremely excited. We regarded it as a wonderful opportunity to experience the real life and couldn't resist the desire to be involved in it.
Having signed up for the activity, I returned home to prepare the luggage. Hardly had I entered my bedroom when I took out my suitcase. I packed my necessities into it which included some clothes, towels and the water glass. I couldn't wait to experience the activity.
Then came the big moment. Together with my classmates, I came to the watermelon patch. The moment we reached the destination, we were divided into several groups and got down to work. Some students were responsible for picking the watermelons; some students put the watermelons into the baskets while others carried the baskets filled with watermelons to the specified place. Tired as we were, we were in high spirits.
Time passed before we knew it. After getting the task finished, I returned home and recalled the whole day, sharing my excitement with my parents. With my favorite meal served, they spoke highly of me. An overwhelming sense of pride came over me.
It was through this experience that I realized that labor is glorious. Never could it fade from my mind and I expected another activity like this.
