#21天写作第一天# #修炼专八作文的悲欢#

2018-01-23 本文已影响0人 1277e3752f08

【学号】I15煎鸡蛋

【前言】

★每天亲自写一篇专八作文。

★作文题目来源于我自己购买的专八作文辅导书。

★本文为记录自己坚持英文写作而存在。

【文章】

Dose Hukou Reform Really Works?

Considering growing tensions of inequitable social phenomena emerging especially among city dwellers and rural ones, the government is currently sparing no effort to exert hukou reform, thus replace the old one. The new hukou system now implemented in thirty municipalities, province and automotive regions, aims to better distribute social welfare and better meet public interest. However, critics and suspicions appear when a range of problems seem to dissatisfied the public.

For a long time, the rural and the urban hukou system in China faces strong criticism for its unequal public services, like education, medical and health care, employment, social security, housing, land and demographic system. This obsolete mechanism will make it harder to protect the rural residents' rights and interests, if not treated appropriately. Nevertheless, the recently unified hukou system launched in several cities and regions shows that the new one cannot be perfect for settling down some crucial problems.Migrants are not capable of having any labor or tendency contract, because most of them are casual laborers, which means migrants essentially fail to enjoy authentic benefits the government designed for them.

Even though the newly-planned policy does not guarantee perfect reformatory result, failure to implement it virtually guarantee undesired result. There is no doubt that hukou reform have hereto benefited lots of people. With conspicuous conflicts are still damaging the public rights, we should therefore work jointly to safeguard them.

【经典句型】

★Doing A dose not guarantee B, but failure to do A virtually guarantee C.

做事情A不一定会有结果B，但是不做事情A一定会有结果C。

【地道搭配】

★face strong criticism 饱受批评

★sth make it harder to ...使做...更艰难

★sth can be perfect for ... 被用来做...会很完美

★spare no effort 不留余力

【写作感想】

★只有两个多月的时间就要专八考试了，而今天却是第一次写专八作文。通过写这一篇作文，我发现其实我第一段写的时候感觉还行，可是写到后面的时候有种“书到用时方恨少”的感觉，简单来说就是输出做得不够。这份作文的最低限度是300个字，我写的作文的话怎么也没有300字吧？不过没关系，日积月累，以后字数可以慢慢增加。感觉自己在写作这篇作文的时候，我的第六感隐约告诉我里面会有很多中式英语的表达，嗯……总的来说还是这可能使输入还得做得不够。不过我能够开始坚持写作的计划，我已经很开心了，虽然这第一篇还有很多细节还没处理好，不过我觉得我以后会做得越来越好的，加油！

★UP主很久没写过英语文章了，如发现错误，欢迎指正！O(∩_∩)O~