2019年6月六级写作预测
话题:经济
【题目要求】
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on the topic:My View on Shared Economy. You can cite examples to illustrate your views. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
【写作指导】
para 1: introducing the importance of shared economy.
para 2: presenting the advantage of shared economy in detail.
para 3: illustrating the disadvantages of shared economy in details.
para4: giving your own opinions on this issue and make a conclusion.
【优秀范文】
In the long history of commercial development, great changes have taken place in every field of economy. Shared economy, as an innovative product of the progressive era, has greatly changed people's traditional way of life.
On the one hand, shared economy improves people's living and working efficiency. That is especially true that time and space are shortened by the shared economy, which brings great convenience to people. For instance, the emergence of online car-hailing, such as DiDi, has indeed given many people without proper means of transport a very fast travel choice, which not only saves time for people to wait for public transport but also shortens the distance to the car station. Therefore, it seems that shared economy has greatly improved people's quality of life
On the other hand, there are intense supervision and management problems in the shared economy. That is to say, management system is not mature for enterprises, because there are no complete relevant laws and regulations to support. Take the shared bikes for example, they can be seen everywhere in the street, which hinders the normal operation of urban traffic.
From what has mentioned above, in my opinion, the advantages of the shared economy far outweigh its disadvantages. As long as people continue to improve this economic model, it will boost economy.
【好词好句】
progressive era 前进的时代
online car-hailing 在线打车
brings great convenience to 为……提供巨大便利
proper means of 合适的方法
supervision 监督;监管
hinder 阻碍; 妨碍
outweigh 比…重(在重量上);比…重要;比…有价值
boost 促进;增加;支援
1. For instance, the emergence of online car-hailing, such as DiDi, has indeed given many people without proper means of transport a very fast travel choice, which not only saves time for people to wait for public transport but also shortens the distance to the car station.
例如,滴滴等在线打车软件的出现确实给许多没有适当交通工具的人提供了一个非常快速的旅行选择,这不仅节省了人们等待公共交通的时间,而且缩短了到达公共车站的距离。
2. Take the shared bikes for example, they can be seen everywhere in the street, which hinders the normal operation of urban traffic.
以共用自行车为例,它们可以在街道的任何地方,这阻碍了城市交通的正常运行。
3. From what has mentioned above, in my opinion, the advantages of the shared economy far outweigh its disadvantages.
综上所述,在我看来,共享经济的优势远大于它的劣势。