写作强化课

2017-11-05 本文已影响0人 Babus

写作评分：

综合写作与独立写作：同样重要，各50%（综合更简单，有希望拿满分）

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作业：用模板，同义词积累，用www.collinsdictionary.com，点thesaurus

语料积累：36页

推荐书：赖世雄，张满胜（英语语法新思维）

post-writing（3次）

revising--meaning（检查意思，发展等，建立读者身份）
editing（改语法）
profreading（再回顾）

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主题句常犯的错误

主题句只写结果不写过程
主题句有多个focus
主题句要很直白，不能很隐晦或者有哲学高度。
主题句上一定要写topic
主题句一定是总结性的。
各段之间的连接词要背熟。充分理解
主题句上不能有包含关系。

若主题句想不出来：MTMPAPES

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绝对词题，让步更好写。

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In the first place，joining a sports team can help us make friends quickly.
In contrast，people may be sometimes ignored while participating in community activity which has lots of people.
However，when traveling，friends may create conflict because of the diffirent life styles.

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开头

不涉及发展部分，极少量的组织。
对于评分标准不重要，但对写好文章很重要。
3句话40字左右就行。

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背景介绍：扣着社会现象来写，马上改写题目迅速进入主题，亮明观点。

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越来越的写法：
more and more
increasingly more
the number of something that is increasing/rising/growing.
an increasing number of sth
我认为：
as far as i am concerned

from my perspective

对什么有好处
be rewarding to
be benificial to
be advantageous to
be contributive to
be conducive to
有坏处
be harmful to
do harm to
have/exert a negative/damaging effect/influence on sth

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开头的经典句型

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run decidedly in favor = i am in favor

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some people claim that good food most contributes to an enjoyable vacation，while others prefer good location. As far as i am concerned，i run decidedly in favor of good friends contributes the most.

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结尾

结尾与开头为镜像

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一个段只能有一个focus，不能说社会活动可以省钱，交朋友，省时间（错误，一个focus）

general与specific

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general让不同的人有不同的意思，所以不太ok，不要用general
开头结尾可以general，主题句可以。
但是你的发展不可以general，要用specific的点

话题

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假如我们只想得到tell jokes
那么详细描述这个例子:
讲出
时间地点人物起因经过结果

gifts remind us of special people in our lives

细节：

remenber good times with the giver
think of good feelings about the giver
a reminder whenever we see the giver frequently or infrequently

eating at home is better than eating at restaurants

eating at home is more cheaper and healthier
quite and warm,there are not so many people talking around you
talk about some family things
gather a family in a room, help strength the bonds with each other
restaurants meals high in fat and calories
at home you control ingredients
retaurants big plates of food
at home,you control portion size (西方是一份一份的)

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loving a pet can interfere with relationship with people

loving a pet can help you become more patient，beacuse you have to look after your pets and form the habits of feeding them. if you get used to it,you will be more likely to care about your friends. Sometimes you can easily get along well with others result from the same hobby. When you love a pet，you have to spend time going outdoor with them，which can avoid just staying at home and help you become outgoing. In addition, this can also keep you warm hearted and you will be always willing to help us.