【2020雅思小作文写作讲坛004】地图

对于两幅或多幅对比类地图的写作需要思考以下几个问题：

1、什么不变？

2、什么会变（变大/变小）？

3、什么被替换？

4、什么被增加或移除？

报告采用四段和三个板块：

一、导入（转述问题）

二、概览（描述主要差别/改变。注意区分与其他图表中的趋势和步骤的讨论。）

三、关键特征（展示和高亮重要特征）

1、特征（1）（图一现有/已有/过去的设施）

2、特征（2）（图二现在/计划/未来的改造：保留了什么？增加/扩展或减少/缩减了什么？拆除了什么？目的是什么？内部和外部分别有什么变化？）

小结：

1、行文连贯

2、概览不漏

3、变化周知

4、注意时态

5、句式复杂

下面是我写的剑13测试1的小作文范文：

The two maps illustrate the availability of express way to a city hospital in the year 2007 and 2010.

Overall, it is obvious that there were more traffic infrastructure available in terms of roundabout, car park and bus station in 2010 than 2007. As a result, both hospital staff and the general public would find it easier to reach the hospital and access medical services there.

In 2007, there was a ring road around the hospital. The ring road was connected to the City Road in the south via the Hospital Rd. There were six bus stops located on each side of the north south bound Hospital Rd. To the east of the Hospital Rd, there was a car park for both the staff and public with an entrance on the north side leading to the Ring Rd.

In 2010, three years later, two roundabouts were built at the two end of the Hospital Rd linking the City Hospital and the City Rd. A brand new bus station was constructed to the west of the vertical Hospital Rd and the newly built bus station had two entrances to its northeastern and southeastern direction respectively. What’s more, all the six bus stops were demolished from their previous site and moved to the new bus station. Besides, the original car park was preserved yet limited to be used only for the staff. In addition, a new public car park was constructed to the east of the ring road for the public use.

最后附上剑13测试1的题目：

剑13测试1