小学生百问百答:何谓从句简化变分句
学生问:什么叫从句简化变分句?
Tyger举例说明。
L49:
分句:Tired of sleeping on the floor, a young man in Teheran saved up for years to buy a real bed.
从句:Because he was tired of sleeping on the floor, the young man in Teheran saved up for years to buy a real bed.
调整:A young man in Teheran saved up for years to buy a real bed,because he was tired of sleeping on the floor.
L49:
分句:Glancing at the bits of wood and metal that lay around him, the man sadly picked up the mattress and carried it into his house.
从句:After he glanced at the bits of wood and metal that lay around him, the man sadly picked up the mattress and carried it into his house.
无需调整
L50:
分句:Looking round, I realized with a shock that I was the only passenger left on the bus.
从句:As soon as I looked round, I realized with a shock that I was the only passenger left on the bus.
无需调整
L55:
分句:Armed with the new machine, a search party went into the cave hoping to find buried treasure.
简单句(三黄蛋):The search party was armed with the new maching and went into the cave and hoped they would find buried treasue.
无需调整
L56:
分句:Built in 1885, it was the oldest car taking part.
从句:It was built in 1885, and it was the oldest car which took part.
无需调整
L57:
分句:Glancing at her scornfully, he told her that the dress was sold.
从句:As he glanced at her scornfully, he told her that the dress was sold.
调整:The waiter told her that the dress was sold, as he glanced at her scornfully.
L57:
分句:Not realizing who she was, the assistant was eager to serve her this time.
从句:Because the assistant did not realized who she was, he was eager to serve her this time.
调整:The assistant was eager to serve her this time,because he did not realized who she was.
L65:
分句:Dressed up as Father Christmas and accompanied by a 'guard of honour' of six pretty girls, he set off down the main street of the city riding a baby elephant called Jumbo.
转从句后十分臃肿
L74:
分句:Dressed in dark glasses and old clothes, they had taken special precautions so that no one should recognize them.
从句:As they were dressed in dark glasses and old clothes, they had take special precautions so that no one should recognize them.
调整:They had take special precautions so that no one should recognize them,as they were dressed in dark glasses and old clothes.
L80:
分句:On arriving in England, they were taken to the Crystal Palace by train.
从句:As soon as they arrived in England, they were taken to the Crystal Palace by train.
无需调整
L81:
分句:Working rapidly in the darkness, he soon changed into the dead man's clothes.
从句:He worked rapidly in the darkness and he soon changed into the dead man's clothes.
无需调整
L82:
分句:Realizing that this was no ordinary fish, the fisherman made every effort not to damage it in any way.
从句:Because the fisherman realized that this was no ordinary fish, he made every effort not to damage it in any way.
调整:The fisherman realized that this was no ordinary fish, so he made every effort not to damage it in any way.
L85:
分句:I have just received a letter from my old school, informing me that my former headmaster, Mr. Stuart Page, will be retiring next week.
从句:I have just received a letter from my old school, which informed me that my former headmaster, Mr. Stuart Page, will be retiring next week.
无需调整