写作反馈直播复盘(Justin) 181011

写作反馈直播复盘(Justin)

 181011

问题清单（Checklist）：

忌 随意性/想当然

忌 中文表达

查 字典

名词单复数（注意集合名词）

查 专有名词

出 舒适区

对称一致

标点符号

查 介词

朗朗上口

本次复盘，我的第一要务是列出一个粗略版的问题清单，以后在实践应用中再随时补充。这个清单，每次英文写作前后都需参考，所以要随身携带。目前，我的解决办法是在手机桌面上放了名为CHECKLIST的Word文档，便于日后参考。

解读我的清单，不外乎秉承“僵化、优化、固化”三步走的方针，给自己开了方子。拎出“名词单复数（注意集合名词）”一条，英语中名词的单复数有时意义不同，如trouble、effort、profit，集合名词则外表单数内在复数，如staff、faculty，容易出错。

学习方法

这次复盘前，我把阅读材料里的句子和段落都改了改，标记出来错误的地方。相比上次复盘前只是看过阅读材料，我认为这次馅饼掉下来时，能咂摸出不同的滋味了。总结：自己先改改看的做法可以保持，改错的同时需要着眼看看范例的优点（我以往太看重挑毛病）。

语言点

MODULE

释义：A module is one of the separate parts of a course taught at a college or university.

例句：I’m doing two optional modules.

PROFIT/PROFITS

PROFIT可数名词，具体一次交易的一笔利润。PROFITS不可数名词，利润的整体。

例句：unless there was a profit in it.

ELDER

//elders [plural]: old people

例句：day care forelders[=the elderly]

STAFF/FACULTY

释义：The staff of an organization are the people who work for it.

A faculty is a group of related departments in some universities, or the people who work in them.

CRIME/CRIMES

crime 有时指“一种犯罪”，有时统指“犯罪”。例如：Murder is a crime. 和 There was a great decrease of crime in recent years.

GENETICALLY MODIFIED FOOD 转基因食品

ADVANCE/DEVELOP

Tik Tok/TikTok/Douyin/WeChat/Golden Week 专有名词

//bn=billion/m=million

//the post-90s generation 九零后

//a dizzyingarray/variety of

释义：dizzying,always used before a noun: causing or likely to cause dizziness

//a rash of

释义：If you talk about a rash of events or things, you mean a large number of unpleasant events or undesirable things, which have happened or appeared within a short period of time.

//a host of

释义：A host of things is a lot of them.

//places of interest（注意单复数）

LOCALS/NATIONAL

LOCALS: a person who lives in a particular area, city, or town:usually plural

You can refer to someone who is legally a citizen of a country as a national of that country.

//natural wonders

//tourist detention

BORDER/BORDERS

释义：sing.& (now usu.) in pl. A frontier district of a country or territory.

//a dreadful challenge

BAGGAGE

释义：You can use baggage to refer to someone's emotional problems, fixed ideas, or prejudices.

INCLUSION/INCLUSIVENESS

IMPARTIALITY/NEUTRALITY

//a sutble study 头韵

背句子

自从了解死记硬背（先僵化）的优越性后，我新培养了一个习惯：看到好句子不由分说先背下来，抄在硬纸卡片上，以便上班路上再背背、写作之前瞅一瞅。这次复盘，总结背背佳的句子如下：

Hard work rarely goes unrewarded. This is also true of English learning.

A rash of problems emerged.