甘比英文拓展写作-描述房间-鯨鯨菰

Day 2

The middle of the picture is a wooden ladder. However, the ladder has a more useful function that every step is a flat board which places books and sundries. What a clever way of using storage space!  On the left of the ladder is a window-blinds. Now it is half unhooked. Outside the window, a corner of the woods is presented in front of us. The season now may be Autumn since leaves are turning yellow.

修改：                                                                                                                      places→can place                                                                                                                               

Back to the room, on the right of the ladder is the space for cooking. Complete sets of kitchen electrical equipment are located here. Above the kitchen sink is a window decorated with carved pane. Near the window, pots and pans are hanging on the wood siding wall. A table and two chairs are against the wall. Near the table, long wooden shelf is sticked for placing condiment. Around the space there are three cup-shaped lamp. Gentle and warm light set the whole room very cosy.

修改：                                                                                                                   room→kitchen

Along the ladder we can reach the second floor of the house which seems to be a triangled-shaped space around by rails. In general, the decoration and furnitures are maily wooden, which demonstrates an atmosphere of nature in the law.

修改：                                                                                                                maily→mainly

总结：今天的作文写的没那么痛苦，描述这个室内的场景比昨天的自然风景容易多了~但是写作过程中还是过于依赖金山词霸，这是没有盘活已学词汇的结果。另外，与群里其他同学相比，自己用到词汇还是太弱太低级。句式语法方面因为都较简单，还有很大进步空间。

今后的学习要做到——

1.写作前：充分阅读课程学习资料，特别是笃师提到的【词汇积累】部分要动手去做，积累好主题相关的新单词，对【轻松阅读的材料】要进一步吸收。

2.写作中：减少对词霸的依赖，遇到一时想不起的表达时要多想想，盘活现有记忆。

3.写作后：提交完打卡后回到群里多看同学们的文章和讨论，适时记录。第二天时学习前先看上传的范文和点评。

4.总体上要调整每天的学习时段，早点完成任务把链接发到群里，与大家一起切磋。