这样学英语至少可以让你赚百万（写作篇）
写了这么多年的作文，今天也让天朝大大们来开启个'朕已阅'模式，看看老外的中文作文有没有暗爽的感觉？天道好轮回，苍天绕过谁！
写作那么难吗？其实写作本身不难。拿我自己举例，今年2.5号刚加入简书，写到第9篇时，就有出版社编辑找我出书。而我现在一共也才写了15篇。目前有3个编辑找过我谈出书的事。清华南都微博和公众号转了我的文章。微博已发，公众号还未发。其间文章也授权过其他公众号，广播节目，也成为了某公众号的特约作者还有读者付费约见，为他们量身定制英语学习计划。这些都是加入简书的意外收获。和大家说这些是想告诉大家，我是写作小白，之前没在公共平台写过字。但是，一写不要紧，还上瘾了。我行，难道你不行吗？何况很多人写了那么久！如果你是会看文章会识别干货的读者，你会发现我的文章都是以逻辑为基础，一系列一系列写的。按我说的做，赚钱根本不是问题。绝对的诚意满满。
下图是清华南都发表的我的百万单词篇。
写作难的是，你没有扎实的专业知识、持续的输出能力、缺少一颗发现生活美好且细腻的心、及触类旁通的能力。四者关系层层递进。
英语写作的❌示范
1.把口语中的语感直接带入写作。
口语和写作不就是一回事吗？都属于英语中的输出环节。写作不就是把你所说所想写出出来吗？为什么有的人口语听起来挺流利，其实你仔细一听里面语法错误很多。为什么？太相信自己的语感了。记住，所有的交流都是有层次的。外国人虽然明白你在表达什么，但心里也真的很清楚你的交流水平。
2. 不研读优秀范文，拿笔就写。
不看满分作文，你的衡量标准何来？不看满分作文，你的精准用词何来？不看满分作文你的逻辑何来？
3. 只会好好说话，不会不好好说话。
一就是一，二就是二。从来不进行句子扩写，缩写练习。也从来不美化包装自己的语言。祖国的花朵们，除了美颜P图外，你也可以用美图秀秀PP你的'语言'，尽量做到'颜值'与'言值'之间等价随意切换。
4.不打磨逻辑，写作思维。
什么是好的写作？就是让人看完第一句还想接着看第二句。每句话与每句话之间都是有内在逻辑联系的，大家从来不问自己为什么接下来写这句？还可以怎么写？这样写是不是更好？从来不问。希望大家不断的多问自己为什么？这样你会不一样。
Reading makes a full man, conference a ready man, and writing an exact man.
给大家演示下一个好句子在脑中形成的层次感，希望大家可以受到启发。
中文写作举例：
当你想夸美女时，你应该想到的是
指如削葱根
口如含珠丹
纤纤作细步
精妙世无双
而不是：
咦妮儿你长得怪得劲嘞
当你想和意中人表白时，你应该想到的是：
玲珑骰子安红豆，入骨相思知不知？
而不是：
嘿镁铝要不要咱俩谈个恋爱？
英文写作举例：
当你想说，我永远都不会嫁给你。
普通：
I will never marry you.
得到：
Never will I marry you.
Under no circumstance will I marry you.
学霸：
You are the last man I am willing to marry .
I will marry anybody but you.
学霸霸：If you were the last man in the world, I would definitely remain single.
那么英文句子到底怎样写才好呢？我再给大家个小技巧让你的写作句型立刻很不一样了，而我只做一个动作。
试着改变一下每个句子的开头
A. People throughout the world have greatly demanded all kinds of nutritious food.
B. There is a great demand across the world for all kinds of nutritious food.
1.以形容词或形容词组开头
Jessica was very pleased and telephoned her mother．
=Pleased,Jessica telephoned her mother．
The young lady，hungry and thirsty，went back home．
=Hungry and thirsty，the young lady went back home．
2. 以副词开头
The cute boy stayed there quietly．
=Quietly，the cute boy stayed there．
3. 以不定式开头
He got up very early to catch the flight．
=To catch the flight，he got up very early．
4. 以现在分词或过去分词开头
I was filled with diappointment when I went home from school that cold winter day.
=Going home from school that cold winter day , I was filled with anticipation．
If you give me enough time，I can do it better．
=Given enough time，I can do it better．
5. 以介词短语开头
He like many other adventurers had experienced fear and conquered it．
=Like many other adventurers，he had experienced fear and conquered it．
6. 以同位语开头
Jim，our monitor，always likes giving orders to everybody．
=Our monitor，Jim，always likes giving orders to everybody．
7. 以从句开头
Tom had already surprised his friends several times before he sailed round the world single-handed.
Before he sailed round the world single-handed，Tom had already surprised his friends several times．
You will greatly increse your sales number ,if you have a quality control inspection．
=If you have a quality control inspection， you will greatly increase your sales number．
就这么小小的一个举动，就可以让你高于平均水平。
下面我再给大家升级下写作的正确姿势,不能给大家一一写完，但我给你处理问题的思考方式会很受益。
1.你得有些用得上的同义词转换
reduce减少
=decrease
=drop
=fall
=cut
categorize种类
=type
=classify
=be grouped
= grade
strategy 方法策略
=way
=method
=approach
=technique
consistent持续的
=lasting
=stay the same
=constant
=unchanging
2.你得有些高频短语
先进的科学技术
=advanced science and technology
人们普遍认为
=It is commonly believed that ...
利远远大于弊
=The advantages far overweigh the disadvantages
3.你得有些句型套路，但要灵活应用
文章开头段
Nowadays chatying online is growing in popularity among the youth.Some get fun; Some get friends; Some even get fame.However, we should not allow these benefits blind us to the problem it may pose.
文章结尾段
Only when we treat plagiarism as serously as it deserves to be treated will we accomplish the first step toward the elimination of various forms of unethical academic behaviors on our campuses.
预测趋势段
Although other favorable things may still be said about classroom teaching compared with cyber education. The two advantages of traditional classes discussed above are already sufficient for the former to live rather than to die out in advance of the latter.
4.你应该有些细节积累（所有的考试好文章都是细节取胜）
托福题目：Some people prefer to do exercise alone while others would like group sports. Which do you prefer?
假如你同意exercise alone
那么其中之一细节描写应该是如下：
Individual activities like yoga or meditation take your mind off work and life; soothing music and the Fuchs on body and mind creates an outlet for stress. Similarly, jogging and marathon help foster persistence and endurance because by spending time on one's own, an individual opens up a dialogue with the inner self and puts the weigh back into the essence of sports.
学好写作只有一个标准：一切你不会的，技不如人的，都是你的进步空间。平时要会读书巧积累，学习学习在学习！积累积累再积累！当你的才华还撑不起你的野心的时候，你就应该静下心来学习；当你的能力还驾驭不了你的目标时，就应该沉下心来，历练；机会永远是留给最渴望的那个人。
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