13 –高级-单元1：WRITING ABOUT A NEWS
题目
Think of a story that has recently been in the news. Write your own report of the story.
老师留言
Missing word (MW): When you were talking about the story that recently happened, I noticed that you missed out a word in one of the sentences, “has cracked down an illegal gathering of Chinese citizens who self-claimed as christians”. In English, we use “are” when talking about things that exist. You should have said, “has cracked down an illegal gathering of Chinese citizens who are self-claimed as Christians”. You wrote “including elderly and kids“. Rather write “including the elderly and kids“. Please be careful with your use of articles.
A Chinese-American priest has been hushed while preaching (April 25, 2017, Harry reports at Bally’s CBD center, Guangzhou, China.) A united law enforcement unit of Guangzhou, has cracked down an illegal gathering of Chinese citizens whoareself-claimed as Christians, and held up their organizers for further interrogations. Among other spoils of this unexpected swoop-down is about a ton of books and materials. Informed by pro-authority local residents, local police department learned in advance that a house church, hosted by Mr. Huang, had invited Mr. Wang Zhiyong, a priest from Sussex, Virginia,United States, to give religious lectures in Guangzhou. Immediately, other authorities concerned were also alerted. An injunction was issued to Mr. Huang who was ordered to cancel the event in his house church. However, among the believers there was a businessman who offered a luxury conference room of his company to the banned church activities. With the instruction of higher-level leaders, a join-hands law enforcement team was forged instantly, which includes well equipped police and plainclothesmen of Public Security Bureau, officers from Guangzhou Branches of National Security Bureau and China’s Religious Affairs Bureau, security guards and auxiliaries of the CBD center, etc. An absolute Armada! Morning, packing with hundreds of Christians, including kidsandtheelderly, the conference room is resonating Mr. Wang’s preaching: believe in God; follow up Jesus Christ and theteachingof the Bible… Almost none of them detects that they have been surrounded by hundreds of raiders who, spamming into the room, shut down the microphone abruptly. While many others are scared, Ms. Song Shaozhe, an official employee of China’s State Administration for Industry and Commerce, stands up to blame that the law enforcement raid is violating China’s laws and procedures inmanyways. She even claims that she has smelled alcohol from the breaths of a chief officer. How ridiculous! Soon, she was escorted to the local police office for further education, and luckily released late afternoon of the day. Ms. Ketty Tan, one of associates of the priest, was also questioned. She came fromHong Kong, and, with her tongue-tied speaking of Mandarin dialect, she made several interrogators laughing and then losing temper and patience. Everything went as expected except for one man, Mr. ChengZhunqiang, a human rights lawyer. When the law enforcement raid was concluding in the mid-afternoon, there came he. “Where is Mr. Wang the priest? Has he eaten lunch?” He urged. When an officer answered “Who are you? It has none of your business!”, Cheng shouted back, accusing this law enforcement raid is completely illegal. Almost caught off-guard, the officers in the room were overwhelmed. To prevent loosing control of the situation, they released Mr. Wang the priest. “Behave your men!” They warned him, and then left, with their trucks loaded, and with dozens of Christians left behind sticking around in the empty conference room, murmuring prayers repeatedly. Tears drench their eyes. Mr. WangZhiyongis a Chinese. He graduated from China University of Politics & Law, and was a student activist in 89/64TiananmenSquare Movement. He baptized to be a Christian about 20 years ago, and emigrated to America 10 years ago. Even though he has become an eminent priest in America, he may overlook that China is now the second largest economy leaded by the most powerful political party in the world.
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