9.silver screen
2019-10-04 本文已影响0人
小Dang
Apps for the old: Silver screen
摘抄了两个句子。
第一个是有关比较,把Shi和Zhou对于手机的热情与对华尔兹的热情相比较,用了一个词match
A picture of geriatric nostalgia—until you meet Ms Shi and Mr Zhou, a couple in their 70s whose enthusiasm for the waltz is matched only by that for their smartphones.
第二个句子对比年轻人和年老app市场的状况时,用了两个短语,一个是fight over可见竞争激烈,一个是be up for grabs,可见潜力巨大。
Unlike the young, whose fragmented attention is fought over by thousands of apps, retirees are up for grabs.
文中提到老年人时,用到了很多表达:
the old
the oldies
the silver
the Senior
the elderly
elderly folk
old-timers(Am English)
写文章时,故事导入,以小见大,会更容易吸引人读下去。这个在西方的新闻报道中比较常见,现在国内的报道也经常出现这种模式。我们自己写文章时也可以借鉴。