2018-03-27

Topic:
Traffic and accommodation problems are increasing and government should encourage some businesses to move from cities to rural areas. Does advantage outweigh the disadvantages???

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Introduction:
Currently, it is no rare to see that many factories are encouraged to move from cities to rural areas. As far as i am concerned, the merits of this practice outbalance its possible demerits.

support1:
Numerous benefits can be gained by inspiring the businesses to run in the remote rural areas.
First, the most obvious merit is that the environment in city can get improved .Further ,it is conceived that over-expansion of factories will inevitably trigger environment-related problems, hence , the unpleasant living environment can be effectively resolved if some factories …….Eventually ,the migration of businesses will, to a large extend，inject new vatality into the further development of rural areas. More local job opportunities can be created thus prosper local economy.

support2:
Suburbs usually have better surroundings than urban areas.So that companies can provide their employees with a better official environment and living conditions, which would enhance their enthusiasm for work. In addition ,a comfortable official environment can decrease talent-flowing and ensure company's development.

concession:
Nonetheless, we can never ignore the downside triggered by this policy . Although constructing rural enterprises eases traffic problems, it also increase the cost of transportation for those who live in city.

conclusion:
In closing, i believe that moving some business to rural areas will bring more advantages. Even though it might bring about some problems, it is still a preferable attempt in the long run.

will pose a threat to the local environment even though it brings about economic incentive.
incentive 动因 刺激
……have been a frequent topic of discussion
without reaching any definite consensus没有达成明确的共识
consensus 英[kənˈsensəs] 一致; 舆论; 一致同意，合意;
merit 英[ˈmerɪt] 优点优势
take it for granted that 认为理所当然
conceive 英[kənˈsi:v] 构想 设想
hence 因此
inject 注入
vitality [vaɪˈtæləti] 活力; 生命力; 生气; 持久性;
suburb郊区
Nonetheless 然而
talent-flowing人才流动
downside消极面
reluctant 英[rɪˈlʌktənt] 不情愿的